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Katie
Jul 21, 2008 22:18:09 GMT -5
Post by ldsgirl Aka Sayari on Jul 21, 2008 22:18:09 GMT -5
This is my first poem. I know that it isn't the best, but Erin has encouraged me to try. So here goes:
Katie
Petter patter, petter patter, petter patter. from the window, the sound did come. High upon my lofty dresser perch, I could see people scurrying to and fro, but nary a drop of water, will touch my soft and shinny fur coat! For I am high and dry, resting upon my castle throne!
Clicky clack, clicky clack, clicky clack, I glance across the room and watch, as Jenni types on her computer. First to Erin, then to Alyse, Amber, Hayley and Rachel too!
Clicky clack, clicky clack, clicky clack, now she's on to Eric, Lizzy, Kevin. Mary_Lynn and Casey too!
Clicky clack, clicky clack, clicky clack, on and on she goes, without a moments rest!
But as for me, I'm quite content, to lay around each day, and yawn, and scratch, and stretch!
Who I'm I you ask? I'm Jenni's pampered kitty cat, of course! MEOW for now, chow, chow!
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Katie
Jul 23, 2008 0:31:00 GMT -5
Post by hockeydude on Jul 23, 2008 0:31:00 GMT -5
This is your first poem? You must have some natural talent there then, this is a lot better than any of the poems I write lol. Great work, Jenni.
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Katie
Jul 23, 2008 0:38:12 GMT -5
Post by ldsgirl Aka Sayari on Jul 23, 2008 0:38:12 GMT -5
This is your first poem? You must have some natural talent there then, this is a lot better than any of the poems I write lol. Great work, Jenni. Thanks very much for the encouragement Eric! Yes, it is my first one. I've always been afraid to write any for fear of being put down, but Erin convinced me to try!
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Katie
Jul 24, 2008 7:56:32 GMT -5
Post by sakura on Jul 24, 2008 7:56:32 GMT -5
I love you so much Jenni! ;D you have a very natural talent for free style and I believe you should try even more!!!!!!
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Katie
Jul 24, 2008 10:50:13 GMT -5
Post by ldsgirl Aka Sayari on Jul 24, 2008 10:50:13 GMT -5
I love you so much Jenni! ;D you have a very natural talent for free style and I believe you should try even more!!!!!! Thanks Erin! It would have never of been written without your encouraging words. I've since written two more poems, but misplaced them! Hopefully I can find them to post.
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Katie
Jul 25, 2008 9:01:11 GMT -5
Post by sakura on Jul 25, 2008 9:01:11 GMT -5
Everyone needs a push in something Jenni ;D (oh btw I got my maths term mark!I so rocked that class! )
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Katie
Jul 27, 2008 3:03:42 GMT -5
Post by ldsgirl Aka Sayari on Jul 27, 2008 3:03:42 GMT -5
Everyone needs a push in something Jenni ;D (oh btw I got my maths term mark!I so rocked that class! ) That's super awesome Erin!I'm so happy for you!
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callmewolf
Child Of God
"Just think, the temple is the only place where Satan can't follow you."
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Katie
Feb 1, 2010 17:50:02 GMT -5
Post by callmewolf on Feb 1, 2010 17:50:02 GMT -5
nice poem. =]
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