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Post by Michael on Jul 4, 2010 15:55:49 GMT -5
Seeing this is my homepage I will post my poems in here.
This is my newest one called "My Savoir" I read it in sunday school today.... you could feel the spirit so much. Ky was joking around saying he won't like it cuz it's not rynemed.. but he loved it.. all the girls liked it too.
My Savoir @ O how their treating him... guards beating him, people spitting at him, throwing rocks... why are they doing this evil work?. The names they call him... are just horrible ... don't they know his God's son?... Jesus Christ our Savoir, he came here to teach us... the sick he healed. the broken he rose, the sinners he helped. This man.... God's son his so willing to watch over us and this.. this is how their treating him?... O why why is he carrying a cross... I must wander in the crowd as a shadow by night I cried out with a voice asking why are they doing this.. my voice was like a leaf fall from a tree. My Savoir... he looks bone dry... I ran towards him pushing my way threw the crowds... with a pot of ice cold water... The guards O how evil they are.. they pushed me back into the fullness of the crowd and the water they took... drank it their self .. Christ O how my savoir looked at me.. with a kindness every so lasting.. I saw the mouthed words "Thank you" With tears in my eyes, I gazed upon my elder brother.. He being push onward towards this hill... why to a hill?. I got back on my feet and began walking in the crowd... people telling me to leave that I'm to young... "To young for what?" I asked myself. they couldn't stop me... no one can. I heard the screams of my Savoir when I was claiming the hill... the mighty hill. I heard gasps in the front, what's happening?. I must see. I ran bumping into random people, they calling after me to leave this place but I must see what's on top of that hill When I got to the top of the hill.... I saw my savoir nailed to the cross the same cross I saw him carrying.... O why... why are they doing this?. When they speared him in the sides I just started to sob... this is my savoir... God's son. I ran to the closest guard I saw... tried to push him down but other guards saw me and ran to pick me up to throw me in the crowds. Can't see from the tears in my eyes, I gazed at several people... I saw the ones on their keens and praying to our father in heaven, O the joy took over me and I ran to them... went on my keens and started to pray. O how I can't get the ringing noise of those who laughed at us... the ringing will never leave me. I stared at him.. and the look I will never forget either.... the look of pain... but then a bit of calmness ... how can he go threw this?...
when the guards ordered us to go back to our homes.... I gazed at my savoir for the last time.
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Post by ldsgirl Aka Sayari on Jul 6, 2010 14:31:37 GMT -5
Thanks for sharing your poem Michael!
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Post by Michael on Jul 7, 2010 0:41:14 GMT -5
Your welcome, more is on the way.
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Post by shadow on Jul 8, 2010 9:28:09 GMT -5
"I must wander in the crowd as a shadow by night" Fav line. I liked the poem michael. thanks for sharing it
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Post by Michael on Jul 8, 2010 14:23:51 GMT -5
Thanks guys, here's the newest poem (I got about 4 others) (haha, and idk why I use "Shadow" a lot.. probly just cuz I feel like one a lot.. but anyways here a poem called "I'm A Shadow")
I'm A Shadow
I'm a shadow to you. I see you in the halls... but you don't see me. I see you in class... but you don't notice I'm here.
I'm a lonely shadow lost in the world. I see you time after time...
The sparkle in your eyes is like a dream. The dream I don't want to end
But I'm scared, to break free. This shadow is me
I want to talk to you but worry you don't even know my name
When you look my way... it's like your looking through me
When I look at you it feels like a dream. I want to break free from this dream... to make it real
So this is the time for me to be notice. I won't be the shadow anymore
I'm breaking free to spread my wings
To say "hello" to you looking at your smile
when you said my name I wasn't a shadow this whole time
When you said "What took you so long"
I simply said "I was scared"
She laughed, with joy and came in for a hug
When we hugged I asked, "how long.. have you notice me?" With tears of happiness I heard the answer
"Forever"
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Post by ldsgirl Aka Sayari on Jul 9, 2010 14:05:03 GMT -5
I liked your poem too Michael!
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Post by Michael on Jul 9, 2010 18:04:29 GMT -5
Thaks very much
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Post by Michael on Jul 14, 2010 23:24:13 GMT -5
Clouds blow by
Look at us, I thought we were perfect.. now I see we're no longer us. You came to me in my darkest days you showed me the light of happiness... you brought out my smile, laugher and even joy.
You made me see the world differently then what I saw from it, you had me see the good in the world.. but now I question all that I learned.
I made you laugh when sadness took over your day, I was always there for you to brighten up your day. When you were gloomy I beg the sun to come out to shine brightly threw out the land. When that failed I called upon the midnight stars to shimmer threw out the night.
When the rain pour down we didn't hid from it.. we ran out and danced in the rain with joy and laughter.
After the rain died down we went inside and built a fire in the warm fireplace. I look at your eyes, sparking in the darken room with the flames of the fire flickering at your beautiful face. Now whenever it rains I feel so alone and I cry trying to forget the memories
When the sunset goes down and the midnight starts come out I always think of those nights, holding your hand laying on the ground looking up talking about life.
Now I weep when I see the stars, I always singled out the most lonely star and think of me.
I feel like a cloud up in the deep blue sky and you being the wind, making up a storm and blowing me away, O how you blow, blowing me away to outer darkest. Making me so cold and alone. making me turn gray way up in the sky and have rain fall down.
Now whenever I start a fire I fight back from crying, you were my girl.. my beautiful gal.
I always think what I did wrong that we're not together anymore... but I can't find anything out. so why... have you done this?
I'm trying to forget the times you said you loved me... I don't see any loved anymore, I wish it was easy with removing these memories...
The old saying "cry me a river" well I think I have cried over five of them.. just thinking about you.
You were my light.. now I'm living a life in the shadows.
I can recall everything you said that night, the night that changed everything you weren't crying like I was.... I was weeping while you cried from just looking at me... after you were done... you said the single words "Good bye" leaving me laying on the ground crying as I gazed up at the stars. My tears felt like icy water dripping from my face.
When I'm laying in my bed, trying to sleep but having a sleepless night once again... I always think what I did wrong, so please tell me now.. I don't want to have my turn with saying "Good bye"
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Post by shadow on Jul 15, 2010 15:31:45 GMT -5
Thanks guys, here's the newest poem (I got about 4 others) (haha, and idk why I use "Shadow" a lot.. probly just cuz I feel like one a lot.. but anyways here a poem called "I'm A Shadow") I'm A Shadow I'm a shadow to you. I see you in the halls... but you don't see me. I see you in class... but you don't notice I'm here. I'm a lonely shadow lost in the world. I see you time after time... The sparkle in your eyes is like a dream. The dream I don't want to end But I'm scared, to break free. This shadow is me I want to talk to you but worry you don't even know my name When you look my way... it's like your looking through me When I look at you it feels like a dream. I want to break free from this dream... to make it real So this is the time for me to be notice. I won't be the shadow anymore I'm breaking free to spread my wings To say "hello" to you looking at your smile when you said my name I wasn't a shadow this whole time When you said "What took you so long" I simply said "I was scared" She laughed, with joy and came in for a hug When we hugged I asked, "how long.. have you notice me?" With tears of happiness I heard the answer "Forever" well that described me for awhile lol
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Post by Michael on Jul 16, 2010 1:31:49 GMT -5
Lol, lucky... I'd like to find someone like that!
Many ppl ask "Who is the girl?" etc.. I always just say it's my ideas for poems and that's it.
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Post by ldsgirl Aka Sayari on Jul 16, 2010 3:53:35 GMT -5
Lol, lucky... I'd like to find someone like that! Many ppl ask "Who is the girl?" etc.. I always just say it's my ideas for poems and that's it. I truly believe that there is someone for everyone out there.......so never stop looking!
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Post by Michael on Jul 16, 2010 13:31:11 GMT -5
I'm not going to go to muti-steak dances anymore.. I gave up, lol... started when I was 14.... now I'm 17, so I'm done with it all.
(We have Muti-stake dances cuz there 3 steaks here.. well 4 and we do dances with each other)
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Post by shadow on Jul 16, 2010 21:46:52 GMT -5
I'm not going to go to muti-steak dances anymore.. I gave up, lol... started when I was 14.... now I'm 17, so I'm done with it all. (We have Muti-stake dances cuz there 3 steaks here.. well 4 and we do dances with each other) ok 1. its spelled stake not steak, spelling it like that makes me hungry lol and 2. keep going till you cant anymore. Its amazing who youll meet
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Post by Michael on Jul 16, 2010 23:12:05 GMT -5
lol, if it makes you hungry, I'll say steak. But it got to the point, that going isn't fun anymore.
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Post by shadow on Jul 17, 2010 20:51:21 GMT -5
why not?
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Post by Michael on Jul 17, 2010 23:19:52 GMT -5
Don't know anyone, and with my shyness and AS... very hard to talk to anyone.. so I just sit by myself... wait till the "fake friends" come.. the priest from my ward who "act" like my friends at dances.. but only dances, not at youth group, church, or anywhere else.
"Hey Mike, why aren't you dancing?" "Hey, I saw you and the person you were dancing with weren't talking, here is a list what you can saw"
but truth be told.. I try and try to talk to the girls.. and they don't look at me, don't say anything back to make it a real convo.. so yeah, not fun
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Post by shadow on Jul 18, 2010 13:47:52 GMT -5
perhaps theyre shy as well? lol
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Post by Michael on Jul 18, 2010 16:38:41 GMT -5
hahahha, nope... I see them talking, laughing, and enjoying their time with other randon guys who ask them.
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Post by Michael on Jul 18, 2010 16:42:33 GMT -5
Anyways, new poem- "Good night, my love" I will never leave your side No matter what night
I'll be the man for you if you say "I do"
We're the prefect team For this everlasting dream
Never going to betrayed you cause we're the prefect two love is in the air
Your amazing.. your mine, your beautiful like a rose... your so rare
You never tell lies Your just so wise
I listen to you with my heart I never see us being apart
Being with you is like flying to space your never a disgrace
You make me feel like the best man alive. You have me survive never going to let you go you make me feel like a pro
I will bring you flowers everyday The look on your face, just make my day
We meant to be with each other, not apart I'm always here for you.. I will not depart I burn inside, when you say "My love"
Your my beloved Now I must say, good night
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Post by Michael on Jul 23, 2010 15:08:56 GMT -5
(Prayer of hope) You give me a place, you give me hope You give me life, that is hard to cope
You give me a world, that is difficult to understand You have me take a stand
And this stand, I do for you Even tho life is a zoo
You will never leave me You will not flee
You gave me faith, hope and truth And yes, I'm in my youth
Your always here, I'm never alone You don't have me be the unknown
When I'm lost, I turn to you You have me see the untrue
And I thank you for it with not letting me quit
Now I must say amen again.
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Post by Michael on Aug 7, 2010 1:47:10 GMT -5
This is my newest poem... wrote it tonight, tell me what it sounds like to you (So I know I did a good job explaing)
~Break free~ Break free
Come and be united No we weren't invited! We gotta rise Come on, come on reach for the skies
We're marching on making a change They will think we gone derange! Get your muskets get the lights We will fight till we get our rights!
We're breaking free, to be united You'll be scared and exited Our people will die Love ones will cry
We're doing this to be free So everyone can see That were uniting there will be roars, there will be deaths there will be fighting
Marching as we go, faring our last breaths, We will unite as brothers Not like the others
We will be strong, we will fight till the end They won't comprehend That we want our freedom and willing to die for it We will commit
We will shout, we will fight, we will win So let begin We're ready to have our freedom, so let us march on Until we reach dawn
Come young come old, we will march as one To get our freedom done We'll sing and march to our battlefield, till we depart So let start
It hits you when a brother falls to the ground When you call for help and look around The only thing you see is darkness, a war has begun
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