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Post by ldsgirl Aka Sayari on Feb 5, 2010 22:41:54 GMT -5
I'm still working on it, but I thought I'd share some of what I have done!
There's so much that I think And so much that I feel It's hard to understand How all of this is real
A smile from every laugh A frown from every tear I don't know which I've benefited From most this year
There've been nights that I have mourned Nights that I have cried.. But the feelings I've felt, These feelings deep inside
They remind me who I am And remind me why I fight For at the end of each dark tunnel There is a light.
If I set aside my pain And put aside my sorrow, There's a lesson to be learned Which will help with life tomorrow.
There's always a battle to be fought And always a struggle to be won But if we turn to the light.. We'll find The Son.
If we give Him our whole hearts And reach with all our might He'll embrace us in His arms And forever hold us tight.
There's so much that I think And so much that I feel So I turn to He, who loves me And know my happiness is real.
Now I know which I've benefited from most this year It's the times that have been hard The times that without Him My life would have been left scarred
I know His love is real I know His words are true And if you turn to Him He will gladly comfort you.
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Post by Michael on Feb 6, 2010 23:23:24 GMT -5
Wow. amazing
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Post by shadow on Feb 23, 2010 15:54:22 GMT -5
It finishes up nicely in my opinion. Maby a few word edits but I really like it
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Post by Equinox3100 on Apr 10, 2010 12:53:46 GMT -5
That is really good.. I would love to hear the notes that go with it.
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