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Post by Andrew the Penguin on Jan 24, 2012 19:10:07 GMT -5
In English we're starting a new poetry unit. Today we started, and all had to write a poem, whatever poem, for the last 5 minutes or so of class.
Here's my first, written in pen.
Why I Love to Write in Pencil
The scritch The Scratch, the feel The rustic tone when graphite peels On a page, made black and white Inspiring fear, removing fright. The genesis of my art A new world born, a brand new start.
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Post by Sayari's other half on Jan 25, 2012 10:36:06 GMT -5
I HATE HOW YOUR 7 LINE POEM IS SO MUCH MORE EPIC THAN MY ENDLESS ONES -_- Really SO I really like it!! You did a great job!
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Post by ldsgirl Aka Sayari on Jan 26, 2012 21:02:02 GMT -5
Yes, I agree! It was very nice Andrew!! A+
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Post by shadow on Jan 27, 2012 13:05:55 GMT -5
I HATE HOW YOUR 7 LINE POEM IS SO MUCH MORE EPIC THAN MY ENDLESS ONES -_- Really SO I really like it!! You did a great job! Then wrote shorter poems.
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